The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The provided chart illustrates the amount of
money
spent on five consumer goods (cars, computers, books, perfume and
cameras
) in
France
and the
UK
in 2010. Units are , measured in pounds sterling.
Overall
, the
UK
spent more
money
on consumer goods than
France
in the period given. Both the British and the French spent most of their
money
on cars
whereas
the least amount of
money
was spent on perfume in the
UK
compared to
cameras
in
France
.
Furthermore
, the most significant difference in
expenditure
between the two countries was on
cameras
. In terms of cars, people in the
UK
spent about 45000$,
while
the French spent 400000$ on the same item.
Similarly
, the British
expenditure
was higher than the French, around 400000$ and 300000$, respectively. In the
UK
, the
expenditure
on
cameras
(350000$) was over double that of
France
, which was only 150000$.
On the other hand
, the amount of
money
spent on other items was higher in
France
. Above 350000$ was spent by the French on computers, which was slightly more than the British who spent exactly 350000$. Neither of the countries spent much on perfume which accounted for 200000$ of
expenditure
in
France
but under 150000$ in the
UK
.
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