Media should include good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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However
, these days, most of the media
companies are sharing enormous news
without having a proper and detailed
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a piece of proper and detailed information
information
about the topic. I completely agree with the aforementioned due to
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Firstly
, factual news
should be included by the media
. This
is to say that, media
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general
public depends Correct article usage
the general
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, when Correct article usage
the medias
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media
news
then
it will lead to people having to believe in that which will ultimaltey
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according to
the Himalyan
Times, alcohol is Correct your spelling
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for 5% of death in Nepal yearly. Correct your spelling
responsible
Therefore
, a proper misleading
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proper misleading information
a piece of proper misleading information
information
about any kind of product will encourage citizens to gain the items without having a
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an
actaul
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actual
Secondly
, These days media
companies can be
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seen
that they are distributing Wrong verb form
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news
to gain popularity. In other words
, Media
companies are thriving to earn money. Similarly
, There
are many platforms where gaining popularity can have a positive and beneficial effect on finance. Fix capitalization
there
As a result
, they focus on sharing as much news
as they can without having the proper research on the topic. For instance
, as per Nepal
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the Nepal
information department
, 30% of online Correct your spelling
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news
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monetary
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To sum up
, I agree that media
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is
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. So, that the readers and viewers gets
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get
news
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happening in the surroundings.Submitted by gurungshreejana13 on
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