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has always been

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part of

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life as it helps to publicise social issues in different

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.

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, these days, most of the

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companies are sharing enormous

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without having

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information

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about the topic. I completely agree with the aforementioned

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reasons

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outlines

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below.

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, factual

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should be included by the

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.

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is to say that,

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is a source of

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in

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which

general

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public depends

upon

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to know what is happening in the country and abroad.

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, when

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the medias

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medias

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interpret false

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then

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it will lead to people having to believe in that which will

ultimaltey

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ultimately

have a detrimental effect

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the

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their life. To illustrate.

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the

Himalyan

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Himalayan

Times, alcohol is

responsilbe

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responsible

for 5% of death in Nepal yearly.

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,

a proper misleading

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proper misleading information

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information

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about any kind of product will encourage citizens to gain the items without having

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actaul

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actual

description of it.

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, These days

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companies can

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clearly

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that they are distributing

news

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to gain popularity.

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,

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companies are thriving to earn money.

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,

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are many platforms where gaining popularity can have a positive and beneficial effect on finance.

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, they focus on sharing as much

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as they can without having the proper research on the topic.

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, as per

Nepal

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Police

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information department

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, 30% of online

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news

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agency

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of

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Nepal are unregistered and their ultimate aim is to focus on

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aspect.

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, I agree that

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should focus

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on valid and researched

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. So, that the readers and viewers

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to acknowledge the true

news

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that is

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happening in the surroundings.