The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In the
given bar diagram Change preposition
The
are shown
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shows
figure
of family in the United States Fix the agreement mistake
figures
by
their yearly remuneration.
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according by
Firstly
, in the year
2007, lowest
earner category was $75,000-$99,999. Only 14 Correct article usage
the lowest
milions
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million
family
earned Fix the agreement mistake
families
this
class. On the other
hand
highest Add a comma
,hand
catgory
$100,000 or more was achieved by almost Correct your spelling
category
29millions
tribes. Less than $25000, $25000-$49,999, and $50,000-$74,999 Correct your spelling
29 million
were belonged
to Change to the active voice
belonged
have belonged
almost
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the almost
same
group, which were 20.5-26 Correct article usage
the same
milions
.
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million
Secondly
, the
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in the
year
2011, lowest
income generated category was $75,000-99,999 which is like the Correct article usage
the lowest
year
2007. Barely 13 milions
households have achieved it. Another similarity Correct your spelling
million
has
found here with the Verb problem
is
year
2007, which was, nearly
27 Rephrase
when nearly
milions
tribes had earned $100,000 or more. In Correct your spelling
million
millions
this
same classification which is near to 30 milions
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million
millions
family
achieved less than $25,000, and $25,000-$49,999 revenue. Again, like 2007 between $50,000-$74,999 salary Fix the agreement mistake
families
earner
belonged to Fix the agreement mistake
earners
near
20 Change the word
nearly
milions
group.
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million
millions
Finally
, in the year
2015, highest
incomeCorrect article usage
the highest
$
100,000 or more Add a missing verb
was $
earned
by 37 Add a missing verb
was earned
milions
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million
millions
family
. Fix the agreement mistake
families
Whereas
in this
year
lowest salary; less than $25,000, and $25,000-$49,999 were generated by 28-30 milions
households. From 15 Correct your spelling
million
milions
to 21 Correct your spelling
million
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million
millions
milions
Add a comma
,milions
family
achieved $50,000-$74,999, and 75,000-$99,000 income.Fix the agreement mistake
families
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, milions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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