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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write an email to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email, give details of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr. XX I hope
this
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 letter finds you well, I am writing
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 letter to inform you that I have an
inconvenient
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 with the clothes that I purchased online from your clothing store
last
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 weekend. On October 25th I watched a gorgeous hat and shirt on your website to use at my graduation party, so I immediately paid
it
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for it
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 with my credit card,
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 the same day the delivery was made and I was
pleasant
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 with your service until that day. The next day, when I was trying the shirt, I realized that it was damaged. I have been your customer
few
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 years ago and it is the first time that I had
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 problem with your company. I would like to reach an agreement with you, I need you to replace the shirt as soon as possible without any charge, because tomorrow I have
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 party and I cannot afford to spend more money
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 clothing. Kind regards,
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