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The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.

The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.
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The table illustrates data about the amount of
money
 that was spent by
people
 on three different categories, namely food, clothes and leisure in Ireland, Italy, Spain,
Sweden
 and
Turkey
 in 2002.
Overall
, we can see that in all countries
people
 spent most of their
money
 on food, drinks and tobacco,
while
 leisure and education was the category that the minimum
money
 was spent by individuals. In 2002,
people
 in
Turkey
 and Ireland spent about one-third (32.14% and 28.91% respectively) of their
money
 on food which was the highest compared to others. Other countries, Spain, Italy and
Sweden
, spent about 15% to 19% of their
money
.
On the other hand
, Italian
people
 spent about 9% of their expenditures on clothing and footwear which was the highest rank among other countries.
people
 in
Turkey
, Spain and Ireland spent 3% less than Italy about 6%.
Sweden
 had the lowest percentage, 5.40%. Leisure and education is the category that
people
 spent the least of their
money
 on
that
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under 5%.
Turkey
 spent just 4.35%.
Sweden
 and Italy had the same volume 3.2%,
however
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 Spanish
people
 spent under 2% of their expenditure.
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