Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Some people believe that the
problems
associated with the environment
should be dealt with a
worldwide scope, Change preposition
on a
besides
that, others do fuck are of the belief that it can efficiently be handled nation wise. With the current severity of the environment
, I think this
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this problem
these problems
problems
should be tackled on a global scale so that everyone can discuss together and come up with ways to solve problems
.
On the one hand, I choose the idea because nowaday
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nowadays
environment
is increasingly seriously polluted and human consciousness is the most important factor for the development of the ecosystem. In addition
, there are some environmental problems
that should be discussed globally such
as global warming,
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and, black
black
hole in the ozone layer. Correct article usage
a black
Therefore
, all countries should unite and form a community to discuss and share ideas to resolve this
. For example
, recent fire
in the Amazon and Australian forests were not only a Fix the agreement mistake
fires
one
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one-country
country
problem, but also
a major concern for the whole world because millions of trees and animals were burned and turned into ashes. However
, many developed came forward to help them financially and professionally to put off the fire and that wish was only granted when they worked together.
On the other hand
, some countries have their own internal problems
such
as water scarcity, pollution and huge amounts of waste that need to be solved with the help of the government and individuals within that country
. A feasible solution can be taken by a country
only after considering the various factors contributing to this
problem. For example
, a country
with very high and serious air pollution levels. Therefore
, the government should pass environmental laws to address them on national
scale. So, that problem will be completely resolved and Add an article
a national
do
not need to go through many countries in the world.
In conclusion, I believe that Correct subject-verb agreement
does
the
Correct article usage
apply
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environment
environmental
enviroment
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environmental
problems
should be solved on a global scale instead
of Correct your spelling
individual
invidual
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individual
country
and from there everyone will be more aware of better protecting the Fix the agreement mistake
countries
environment
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