Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Some people believe that the
problems
associated with the
environment
should be dealt with
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worldwide scope,
besides
that, others do fuck are of the belief that it can efficiently be handled nation wise. With the current severity of the
environment
, I think
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this problem
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problems
should be tackled on a global scale so that everyone can discuss together and come up with ways to solve
problems
. On the one hand, I choose the idea because
nowaday
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the
environment
is increasingly seriously polluted and human consciousness is the most important factor for the development of the ecosystem.
In addition
, there are some environmental
problems
that should be discussed globally
such
as global warming
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hole in the ozone layer.
Therefore
, all countries should unite and form a community to discuss and share ideas to resolve
this
.
For example
, recent
fire
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in the Amazon and Australian forests were not only a
one
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country
problem, but
also
a major concern for the whole world because millions of trees and animals were burned and turned into ashes.
However
, many developed came forward to help them financially and professionally to put off the fire and that wish was only granted when they worked together.
On the other hand
, some countries have their own internal
problems
such
as water scarcity, pollution and huge amounts of waste that need to be solved with the help of the government and individuals within that
country
. A feasible solution can be taken by a
country
only after considering the various factors contributing to
this
problem.
For example
, a
country
with very high and serious air pollution levels.
Therefore
, the government should pass environmental laws to address them on
national
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scale. So, that problem will be completely resolved and
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not need to go through many countries in the world. In conclusion, I believe that
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environment
environmental
enviroment
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environmental
problems
should be solved on a global scale
instead
of
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individual
invidual
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individual
country
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countries
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and from there everyone will be more aware of better protecting the
environment
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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