the graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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As we can see, the graph indicates the monthly temperature range in London, New York and Sydney,
while
from the table below the chart, we can see the total annual Linking Words
hours
of sunshine for the three cities mentioned above.
In London, the temperature swings are described by the yellow line which starts from less than ten Use synonyms
degrees
in January, Use synonyms
then
rises until it reaches its peak between July and August with more than twenty Linking Words
degrees
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in the same city, as the table reveals the average number of Linking Words
hours
of sunshine per year amounts to 1,180.
Use synonyms
In addition
, New York, represented by the blu track, has experienced the same trend, though with higher temperatures, from four Linking Words
degrees
in January to five in December. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the acme is hit in July with nearly thirty Linking Words
degrees
and the annual Use synonyms
hours
of sunshine are more than doubled compared to London.
Use synonyms
Lastly
, in Sydney depicted by the red line, since Linking Words
this
city is in the opposite hemisphere, they have higher temperatures in January and December with somewhat twenty-five Linking Words
degrees
. Yet, July is the colder time of the year with slightly more than fifteen Use synonyms
degrees
. Use synonyms
Overall
, in Linking Words
this
city, the amount of annual Linking Words
hours
of sunlight is barely less than the quantity seen in New York.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, degrees with synonyms.
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