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People are behind fashion.What are the factors influencing fashion?Is it good to be fashionable?Discuss both the Pros and Cons.What your take?

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Music
 is the most definitive part of every civilization and it displays their culture and thoughts.
However
, nowadays people tend to
listen
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 international
music
 and forget about
a
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local one.
This
 tendency and its influence on
the
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music
 and society will be observed in
this
 essay. First of all, it is necessary to understand the effect of
music
. In most
cases
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 it is written in
the
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a
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 way to
translate
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 emotions and
thouths
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thoughts
 and share
it
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them
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 with the listeners. It might help to handle
with
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a
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negative feelings and elevate positive ones. Musicians create it as a piece of art
that is
ment
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meant
 to be enjoyed by everyone. Is that true for every type of
music
? Traditional artists create their songs to tell stories of the old
time
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times
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 and teach us about the importance of
the
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moral
choise
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choice
. Every
singe
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single
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 one of them has
their
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its
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 distinguishable sounds and is it easy to determine the origins of their
insrtuments
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instruments
.
On the other hand
, international
music
 helps people to unite and each composition brings universal ideas that could be enjoyed by everyone.
Moreover
, it helps us to better understand each other and to find something in common.
However
, research
form
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 The Sun discovered that in spite of its huge popularity, international
music
 has
very
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 small amount of loyal fans. Local bands have a small group of fans but every single one of them
know
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 everything about their musicians and
enjoy
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 it from the very bottom of their hearts. In the end, it could be said that it does not matter which
music
 is better
,
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 because the core idea of it is to be pleasing
for
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 a listener. People might enjoy different types of
music
 and they might give a million reasons why
this
 genre is the best.
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