go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

Dear Mrs Najafi, I am writing to let you know that I will not be able to return the books that I borrowed
. Here are my reasons, I hope you understand. My best friend had a bad accident
and she is in hospital and her condition is critical. Since I spend my teens with her and to the fact that I am really dependent on her, I prefer to be with her and be in touch with her mother.
reason, I should go to my friend's town and will come back in a later
, if she will give her awareness and
return the books. I can pay a fine and
work at the library as a volunteer for a
. I would like to say sorry and hope you accept my suggestion as forgiveness. Yours Sincerely, Sara.
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