The bar chart shows expectations for change of european young people in the next 20 years in five different areas.

The bar chart shows expectations for change of european young people in the next 20 years in five different areas.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows expectations for change of european young people in the next 20 years in five different areas.
The bar chart demonstrates the European young generation’s views towards changes in the coming 20 years across five different areas namely health, air quality, water element, food quality and people communication.
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, the majority of the surveyed youth expect that,
besides
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the communication among residents , all other aspects of life will get worse. In detail, air quality receives the worst outlook, with around 75% of believers in their declines.
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figure triples that of people who think
otherwise
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.
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, it is believed by around 60% of European youth that water condition,
as well as
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,health is going to plummet. 
On the contrary
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,
although
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close to three-fourths of the participants in the survey state expect to see improvements in population communication, the rest remain in disbelief. Food element is the category, which receives a mixed response among the surveyed population, with virtually more than half of the people saying it will get better
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others think
conversely
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