The table gives information about the population of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparison where necessary.
The table below illustrates a comparison of the population in New
Zealand
between different ages
in 2011 and 2012.
It is clear that
the population of New Zealand
accounted for the 15-39 age group while
in 2011 old adults were lowest the number of people .
In detail, it is noticeable that the figures between 2011 and 2012 were broadly in the same range almost 801.750 and 800.000 respectively with a -0,2 proportion change. However
, people in 40
-64 categories Correct article usage
the 40
ages
were 1.400.000 in 2011and
in 2012 the inhabitants of New Correct your spelling
2011
Zealand
was
responsible for 1.400.000 with -0.6 per cent changes.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Also
, in the group ages
between
15-Change preposition
apply
39
the populations of New Add a comma
,39
Zealand
in both years were approximately equal about 1.520.000 and 1.500.000 respectively. While
the populations of old people had a significant difference with +4.0 proportion changes. In the end
all Add a comma
,end
ages
in 2012 were more
residents than in 2011 with Correct quantifier usage
apply
+0,6
percentage change.Correct article usage
a +0,6
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