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The chart shows the number of people in Europe who were effected by 4 types of noise by day and by night in cities and in rural areas in 2007

The chart shows the number of people in Europe who were effected by 4 types of noise by day and by night in cities and in rural areas in 2007
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The presented chart illustrates how many
people
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 in Europe were affected by
traffic
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, train, aircraft and
industry
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noise
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 by
day
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 and
night
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 in urban areas and countryside in 2007.
It is clear that
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 most
people
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felt
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 annoyed by
traffic
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noise
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 in cities and rural areas. In the countryside
industry
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noise
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 did not influence
people
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.
To begin
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 with,
people
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 were affected by
traffic
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noise
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, which accounted for 64
million
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 in
day
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 meanwhile
this
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 data was lower at
night
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 at 48
million
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.
Next,
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dwellers who were impacted by train
noise
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 were 10
million
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, and it was
also
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 higher than at
night
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 which was 8
million
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. The figure for aircraft
noise
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 was 4
million
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in
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during
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day
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the day
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 and 1
million
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 at
night
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. With a rise in industrial,
industry
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noise
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was
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influenced 1
million
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 citizens
in
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during
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day
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the day
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 and 250 thousand
people
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 at
night
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.
On the other hand
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, the statistics for
industry
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noise
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 in rural areas were 0. The number of
people
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 affected by aircraft was 2
million
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 in
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day
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the day
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 and a half at
night
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. The train
noise
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 impacted 8
million
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 residents in
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day
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the day
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 and 6
million
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people
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 at
night
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.
Finally
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, there were 34
million
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people
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 affected by
traffic
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noise
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in
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during
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day
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the day
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 and 24
million
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 at
night
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, traffic, industry, noise, day, night, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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