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The chart shows the number of people in Europe who were effected by 4 types of noise by day and by night in cities and in rural areas in 2007

The chart shows the number of people in Europe who were effected by 4 types of noise by day and by night in cities and in rural areas in 2007
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The presented chart illustrates how many
people
 in Europe were affected by
traffic
, train, aircraft and
industry
noise
 by
day
 and
night
 in urban areas and countryside in 2007.
It is clear that
,
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 most
people
felt
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 annoyed by
traffic
noise
 in cities and rural areas. In the countryside
industry
noise
 did not influence
people
.
To begin
 with,
people
 were affected by
traffic
noise
, which accounted for 64
million
 in
day
 meanwhile
this
 data was lower at
night
 at 48
million
.
Next,
dwellers who were impacted by train
noise
 were 10
million
, and it was
also
 higher than at
night
 which was 8
million
. The figure for aircraft
noise
 was 4
million
in
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 and 1
million
 at
night
. With a rise in industrial,
industry
noise
was
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influenced 1
million
 citizens
in
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day
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 and 250 thousand
people
 at
night
.
On the other hand
, the statistics for
industry
noise
 in rural areas were 0. The number of
people
 affected by aircraft was 2
million
 in
day
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 and a half at
night
. The train
noise
 impacted 8
million
 residents in
day
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 and 6
million
people
 at
night
.
Finally
, there were 34
million
people
 affected by
traffic
noise
in
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day
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 and 24
million
 at
night
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, traffic, industry, noise, day, night, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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