You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course.Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir or Madam, With reference to the cricket
at Golftown Sports Club, I would like to request a refund as I am unable to complete it
due to
medical reasons. I am really interested in
as I am passionate about cricket and want to make my career in it. I have not only played many tournaments but
won many matches.
is really useful for enhancing my pre-existing skills and learning new forms of play. Being a left-handed batsman,
has all that I wanted to practice. Unfortunately, I can not complete
because I was injured
due to
a minor accident. After the practice session, when I was going back home from the stadium, a car from nowhere suddenly hit me
I was crossing the road. So, I got my left leg fractured and doctors advised me to take complete rest for 4 weeks. Considering my unpleasant situation, I would like to request a refund for the rest of the
that is
possible. It would be highly appreciated if you do that or if it is possible to enrol in next season's
fee. Looking forward to a positive response. Yours Faithfully, Manpreet Kaur
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