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In some schools, teacher teach a foreign language to student of primary language to student of the introductory class. What are the advantages and disadvantages associated with this phenomenon? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some educational institutions teach a foreign
language
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languages
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. Some find advantages
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 with
this
 phenomenon and others
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believe
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 that
this
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brings
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 disadvantages. In the
reaminder
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remainder
 of
this
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 both points of view will be explored and a logical
conlusion
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conclusion
 will be drawn
at the end
. Nowadays,
English
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the English
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language
 is
a
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importan
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important
 skill for professional life and for some adults is hard to learn .
Firstly
,
learn
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learning
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 a
foreing
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foreign
language
lead
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leads
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many
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to many
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benefics
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benefits
 for people
such
 as better positions in international
companys
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companies
 or access to
scholariships
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scholarships
. What is more, many experts argue that children can learn
new
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a new
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language
 very quickly and
for
this
 reason
a
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is good idea that teachers teach
subects
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subjects
on
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in
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 foreign
languge
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languages
. To illustrate, I am learning
english
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English
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 as an adult as a
consequsence
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consequence
 I spend a lot of money and time and
this
 is a hard journey. Clearly,
learn
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learning
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languages
 as children is an
advantange
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advantage
 and
teach
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teaching
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introductory
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an introductory
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class
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classes
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 in a second
lenguage
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language
 is a way to
achived
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achieve
achieved
 complete immersion.
On the other hand
, many native
languages
 are at risk of missing as
result
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.
To begin
 with, some indigenous
comunities
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communities
speking
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speaking
seeking
a
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apply
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native
languages
ant
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and
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 these are part of their cultures and identities. These
languages
 are at risk
beause
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because
 in many public
shools
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schools
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 official
lenguages
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languages
are use
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are used
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 to teach all
subcjets
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subjects
.
For example
, in
Mexico
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 countryside many
of
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apply
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indigenous people are
lossing
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losing
 their
lenguages becuase
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languages because
 the public schools in
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these
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 areas
teaching
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teach
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 just in
spainsh
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Spanish
 languges. So, for original
comunities
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communities
that
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apply
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schools
teach
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teaching
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 just in foreign
language
 is a risk
of
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to
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 their culture and clearly
this
disadvantages
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disadvantage
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. In conclusion, I believe that for average
joe learn
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Joe, learning
 a
lenguages
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language
languages
 from school
trought
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through
a
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apply
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deep immersion is
a
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an
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advantages
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advantage
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 and
teach
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teaching
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 introductory
class
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classes
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 in
second
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a second
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lenguage
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language
 is a good
aproach
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approach
.
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