The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the

amount

of damage from the production of consumer goods. It is undeniable that pollution

causes

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from

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the making

consumer

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of consumer

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commodity

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commodities

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has become an essential part of our

life

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lives

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.

However

, there are several solutions

for

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this

global

problem

. One of the main aspects of

this

problem

is the air and water

pollutions

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pollution

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, which

is

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increases

in

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every year. One of the main reasons behind

that is

the number of

factories

and stations, which

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discharge sewage into the ocean and exhaust fumes

in

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the air. In fact, making

a goods

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goods

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need

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to release waste materials;

therefore

, these waste materials exert adverse effects on

the

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nature.

For example

, in a rural area of China, a large number of trees demolished in the forest is to erect

factories

with

aim

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of producing iron.

This

could lead to a global

problem

or might result the chaos in

our

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future. To tackle

this

problem

government should to strict laws to control the

amount

of pollution caused by

factories

.

Furthermore

,

factories

need to grow an equal number of trees that they damaged

at

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another place

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other places

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.

This

may be the easiest way to reduce the

amount

of damage. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to

conclusion

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that there

are

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enormous

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amount

of pollution in our world. But, we can control it by creating

a new ways

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new ways

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of solutions. So it would not be surprising to see some changes in the near future. Actions must be taken urgently,

otherwise