The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the
amount
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of damage from the production of consumer goods. It is undeniable that pollution
causes
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from
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the making
consumer
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of consumer
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commodity
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has become an essential part of our
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.
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, there are several solutions
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global
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. One of the main aspects of
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problem
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is the air and water
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, which
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increases
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every year. One of the main reasons behind
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the number of
factories
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and stations, which
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discharge sewage into the ocean and exhaust fumes
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the air. In fact, making
a goods
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goods
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need
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to release waste materials;
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, these waste materials exert adverse effects on
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nature.
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, in a rural area of China, a large number of trees demolished in the forest is to erect
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with
aim
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of producing iron.
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could lead to a global
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or might result the chaos in
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future. To tackle
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problem
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government should to strict laws to control the
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of pollution caused by
factories
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.
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,
factories
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need to grow an equal number of trees that they damaged
at
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another place
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other places
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This
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may be the easiest way to reduce the
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of damage. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to
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that there
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enormous
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an enormous
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amount
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of pollution in our world. But, we can control it by creating
a new ways
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new ways
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of solutions. So it would not be surprising to see some changes in the near future. Actions must be taken urgently,
otherwise
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production
  • consumer goods
  • natural environment
  • damage
  • causes
  • overconsumption
  • demand
  • environmental regulations
  • enforcement
  • natural resources
  • industrial pollution
  • waste
  • inadequate
  • waste management practices
  • public awareness
  • education
  • sustainable alternatives
  • stricter environmental laws
  • recycling
  • responsible consumption
  • clean technologies
  • renewable energy
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