You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in New Zealand. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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My dearest Philip, I hope you are doing well when I return from New Zealand. I am very grateful for hosting me at your home during my business seminar. I felt as comfortable as my home. I would like to see you in London at your earliest convenience. I have started to work since

last

Tuesday. I was quite tired after

such

a long journey. I had jet lag when I turned back home, thankfully, I have recovered quickly. I had a meeting with my boss today. When I was trying to present some figures to him, I realized that I had forgotten a file at your place. The file is a blue collar with a plastic cover and some paper in it. My company name, P&G, is written on it. As I remember, I left it on the work desk in the guest room. Would it be possible to send me that file by post? Paper, inside the file, is quite important. You can send it to me by receiver payment. I would be grateful if you sent it as soon as possible. Sorry for the inconvenience. Thank you very much for your help in advance See you soon, Cheers, Jane Fonda

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The Greeting

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Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

203 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in New Zealand. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

The Greeting

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.othes argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Your friend is coming to your country from abroad, but you can't go to pick him up at the airport. Write a letter to him/her and say -why you can't pick him up -suggest alternative ideas -talk about what he can do in your country

Mr Ramamurthy a 63 year old is a patient in a medical ward of which you are the charge nurse

Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behavior and protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom. To what extend do you agree?