You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

Dear Sir, After greetings, I am writing

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letter to you to inform you that I have heard from my classmates that

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are going to retire soon.

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our

weekend

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we used to recall our memories together

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school days. In our secondary

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you were the best tutor ever. Most of us liked history subject as you were inspiring in teaching these topics,

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, you used to make the historical topics like a story that everybody would be interested to listen to. If you had asked me about any lesson you had taught us, I would have remembered it all,

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your touch is still alive in my mind.

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, I've chosen to

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in the history department at my university I graduated from

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college and I work now in the Ministry of Culture,

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I could say that you fueled my passion for the culture and literature field. I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Best Regards Adam John

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case?

Nowadays in many countries, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assignments over the school year. What do you think of this trend?

Most countries believe that international tourism has harmful effects. What problems are caused by international tourism? What are the solutions to address these problems?

Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.