Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
For the time being ,reading is considered a crucial part of life that at the same time it is both demanding and wishing activity done by a human being. In
this
day and age, some people
think that being addicted to reading is a pretty useful habit while
opponents claim that it relates to which books
individuals are reading. Meanwhile, by counting all the advantages of reading I fully disagree that any chosen book for reading is workable for people
and elaborate on my standpoints in this
essay.
It is obvious that the activity mentioned above is known as a significant factor in getting the qualifications and skills which people
need to improve their lifestyles. That’s why reading includes mental health it can support people
to stay focused on something and improve their memory by remembering a range of vocabularies in this
passage. For instance
, while
being a maniac for books
people
want not to disturb anybody or anything around them can help to increase concentration skills. Furthermore
, the same new vocabulary is given in different books
that readers can easily remember even if they do not pay attention to their definitions.
From another angle, these advantages can not prove themselves that sometimes books
may be useless and dangerous. And I approve that people
should pay attention to choose a suitable book which does not damage them. Because unreliable publishers can publish their works devoted to sinister ideas on the internet it may hurt some readers’ mental who can seldom apply books
or articles. Some books
which are full of wrong political ideas are like this
. Also
, some details written in ancient books
are outdated and today people
can no longer use them. For example
, maps in history are inappropriate at present since the earth's arrangement has changed by natural events over centuries.
In conclusion, while
reading is an effective activity among people
,all humans should have enough information about which book they can choose and read. And I disagree with the preference for all kinds of books
if people
do not find whether useful or useless.Submitted by nazirovmuhammad71 on
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structure
When it comes to your logical structure, you tend to use a lot of complex sentences which make the essay slightly difficult to understand. Try to simplify your sentence structure, while maintaining a formal tone.
task achievement
In the second paragraph, your main point gets lost in complex sentence structures and vocabulary. Make your main points more straightforward and clear.
vocabulary
Some of the words you are using may be confusing for the reader, consider using simpler language. For example, 'maniac for books' could be replaced by 'avid reader' or 'book enthusiast'.
task achievement
You have provided good examples in your essay, but you need to tie them back to your main points more clearly for the maximum impact and relevancy.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite