Some people participate in extra‐curricular activities such as volunteering in charitable events or joining dance groups to gain more knowledge and experience. Others simply focus on their goals such as academic studies or work. Which do you think helps in improving a person’s knowledge and experience and why?

Nowadays, every field has huge competition and requires high academic

knowledge

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and

experience

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. Some individuals are inclined towards extra-curricular

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more

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, others advocate concentrating only on academic

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or work.

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essay will discuss both views and as per my opinion is concerned, I believe both are equally important. On the one hand, participating in additional

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is highly advantageous in terms of gaining more

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and

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. There is no better way compared to do practical work to

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exposure and in-depth understanding.

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, a student volunteering in an NGO to maintain their accounts for someone and at the same time learning accounting in school or university will have in-depth practical

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.

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spending valuable time on volunteering or extra-curricular

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you learn many different skills like management, planning, authorizing etc.

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has been seen that people participating

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additional jobs

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more confidence

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to academics and one should not only be a bookworm.

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, it is essential to participate in various events but still one should consider

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as the prime source of

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. The country is considered as the most educated country which has the maximum literacy rate, which means

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is highly important and each student should be focused on it to

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their goals.

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, an illiterate person can not work at the top positions of any private or government jobs. They should complete their studies with distinction and achieve their target with excellence.

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education

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is the prime source and should be the first target for everyone.

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, I would like to assert that, academic

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is most important to attain your primary studies and participating in extra-curricular

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adds value to your

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I believe both are necessary to compete in today's competitive world.