Some people believe that marriage is a natural and vital part of one’s life. However some other people believe that marriage has become a redundant institution and no longer has much relevance for today’s youth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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human societies for a long period of time. It has been said that it is an essential part of human nature and necessary for people’s life.

Nevertheless

, some oppose and believe that

this

trend has become less significant

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for people of the new generations. Personally, I partially disagree

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latter argument and

this

essay will provide some relevant reasons. On the one hand, there are a number of reasons suggesting the unnecessity of

marriage

. One of the notable reasons is the issue of economics. To elaborate,

due to

huge changes in people’s lifestyles, establishing a family or

marriage

requires huge budgets and

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cost of living.

In other words

, singlehood in

this

era is considered a cheaper way to live;

consequently

, a rising trend of singlehood has been becoming more prevalent.

On the other hand

, despite the aforementioned argument, there are other aspects worth mentioning.

To begin

with, people still long for love and possession, and

this

remains unchanged since the very beginning of civilization.

Therefore

, individuals view

marriage

as a symbol of those values. Apart from that, traditional cultures still play an important role in deciding whether to marry or

otherwise

. Parental and societal expectations have pressured many young adults to launch their new families via the most conservative way, which is

marriage

. Indeed, even though many people believe that

marriage

is natural and necessary for people’s lives, others argue

otherwise

. Financial pressures may impact on decision to live in singlehood.

However

, the issue of

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symbols and the force of conservative cultures are

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remarkably crucial factors concerning individuals’ decisions

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to marry or not.

Thus

,

marriage

will still be an essential institute in human societies, at least in the very near future.