The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart illustrates the male contribution rates in senior development of IBM,Microsoft and
Apple
over a time period of 30 Use synonyms
years
from 1980 to 2010.
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Overall
, it can be clearly recognised a gain of men in higher positions over the three decades for all three companies.
In the Linking Words
year
1980, Use synonyms
apple
consisted of 15% of male seniors Use synonyms
while
the least was from IBM at a rate of 3%. Linking Words
In contrast
, in the Linking Words
year
2010, IBM showed a climb of 63%. Use synonyms
However
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this
is not the case for Linking Words
Apple
and the graph depicts a rate of 25% which is not a considerable growth from the Use synonyms
year
1980. Microsoft indicates a moderate increase during the 30 Use synonyms
years
starting from a percentage of 17% in 1980 and the latest development was 45% in the Use synonyms
year
2010. Even though Microsoft have a steady improvement throughout the Use synonyms
years
1985 to 2000, during the Use synonyms
last
10 Linking Words
years
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the
male involvement has boomed from 30%. Considerably, Correct article usage
apply
Apple
's high position male employees fluctuated during that time. Use synonyms
For instance
, there was a downward trend from 1980 to 1985 and it goes up in the Linking Words
years
of 1990 and 1995. Use synonyms
Consequently
, it again shows a decrease in the Linking Words
year
2000 and Use synonyms
then
rose in the Linking Words
year
2010.Use synonyms
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