A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighborhood. In your letter: - Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase - Give the reasons behind your decision to leave - Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

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Dear Thomas, I hope you are well! Guess what? I have just learned that you want to buy a house close to my home and I would like to let you know that I will move next month

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the amount of crime. As for buying a house in the neighbourhood, I have just one advice for you, don't buy a house here! In recent years the amount of crime increased especially in the youth.

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,on account of the fact that you have kids and

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is why I wanted to

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you! So, let me explain to you why I decided to leave the area.

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you have murder every week and more recently, teenagers stubbed between them. I don't want to let my children grow there! Anyway, you'd have some alternative areas which are really interesting for living.

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, they are building a new area on the North of the river. We will move there and the price is affordable. Check it! Please, follow my advice! take care of yourself! See you soon! Cheers Tony

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

179 words

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