. Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays most of them
are
like to live near to their Unnecessary verb
apply
parent’s
Use synonyms
hose
. Correct your spelling
house
In
Change preposition
This
this
choice, Linking Words
have
advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, when people are, staying near Correct subject-verb agreement
has
to
their Change preposition
apply
neighborhoods
Change the spelling
neighbourhoods
house
are able to Use synonyms
staying
financially well rather than live in Change the verb
stay
Use synonyms
city
and when they Add an article
the city
a city
are
stay Unnecessary verb
apply
at
close to Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
parent’s
Correct pronoun usage
their parent’s
house
will Use synonyms
be
want to Unnecessary verb
apply
expend
more Verb problem
spend
time
Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
traveling
.Change the spelling
travelling
Nevertheless
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
my
opinion I am going to explain with relevant Add a missing verb
is my
example
Fix the agreement mistake
examples
further
paragraph.
On the one hand, if the society is living next to the parents’ Linking Words
house
they will be saving much more Use synonyms
money
. Use synonyms
For Instance
, in my experience, when Linking Words
i
was a child my parents lived with me in the Change the capitalization
I
city
because, both my parents worked in the Use synonyms
city
. Use synonyms
Thus
, we Linking Words
lived
in the town Wrong verb form
live
want
to Correct word choice
and want
expend
lots of Verb problem
spend
money
for the rental, water Use synonyms
bill
, nanny Fix the agreement mistake
bills
salary
..Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
etc
rather than earning Correct your spelling
etc.
money
. Use synonyms
Although
, Linking Words
finally
we moved near to the grandparents’ Linking Words
house
. Use synonyms
As a result
, don’t want to pay big Linking Words
money
for the rent, water bill and nanny salary because we are staying own Use synonyms
house
and my grandparents by take care Use synonyms
me
. Eventually, my family Change preposition
of me
is
able to save more Wrong verb form
was
money
. Use synonyms
Likewise
, above I mention living close to Linking Words
Use synonyms
parent’s
Correct pronoun usage
my parent’s
house
able to success financial side.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, most of them like to stay Linking Words
they
were born Rephrase
where they
place
. Use synonyms
That
Linking Words
is meaning
they Wrong verb form
means
are
like to stay close to Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
parent’s
Correct pronoun usage
their parent’s
house
. Use synonyms
However
, people travel long-distance to Linking Words
the working
Wrong verb form
work
place
Use synonyms
therefore
, everybody Linking Words
waste
Correct subject-verb agreement
wastes
time
Use synonyms
in
the road Change preposition
on
in
Change preposition
apply
spite
Correct your spelling
despite
of live
in Wrong verb form
living
the
hometown. Change the word
their
For instance
, in Linking Words
sri
lanka Change the capitalization
Sri
usually
office is located in the Add a comma
,usually
city
. Use synonyms
Ones
in a blue moon transport is available Correct your spelling
Once
home
town from the Change preposition
from home
city
like Use synonyms
this
situation humans are using public transport .Linking Words
thus
they are using public transport wants to come Linking Words
bus
top very early. if Change preposition
by bus
office
Correct article usage
the office
start
Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
8.00
am they want to leave the Change preposition
at 8.00
house
Around 5.30am.Use synonyms
likewise
, more Linking Words
time
expends in the road they don’t have Use synonyms
relax
Replace the word
relaxation
time
and family Use synonyms
time
.my suggestion is Use synonyms
this
is Linking Words
very
big Correct article usage
a very
disadvantages
live in they were born Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantage
place
.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, in Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
society
many of them Add a comma
,society
likes
to live in their hometown. Change the verb form
like
Accordingly
, their choice Linking Words
also
contrasts. In my opinion, whatever choices are they have advantages and disadvantages. Linking Words
Linking Words
Although
, the above paragraph I explained what is the reason people like to stay close Change preposition
In
their
Change preposition
to their
were born
Wrong verb form
birth
place
and Use synonyms
this
choice Linking Words
advantages
and Add a missing verb
has advantages
disadvantage
.Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
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