. Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays most of them
are
like to live near to their Unnecessary verb
apply
parent’s
hose
. Correct your spelling
house
In
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This
this
choice, have
advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, when people are, staying near Correct subject-verb agreement
has
to
their Change preposition
apply
neighborhoods
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neighbourhoods
house
are able to staying
financially well rather than live in Change the verb
stay
city
and when they Add an article
the city
a city
are
stay Unnecessary verb
apply
at
close to Change preposition
apply
parent’s
Correct pronoun usage
their parent’s
house
will be
want to Unnecessary verb
apply
expend
more Verb problem
spend
time
for
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apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
traveling
.Change the spelling
travelling
Nevertheless
, this
my
opinion I am going to explain with relevant Add a missing verb
is my
example
Fix the agreement mistake
examples
further
paragraph.
On the one hand, if the society is living next to the parents’ house
they will be saving much more money
. For Instance
, in my experience, when i
was a child my parents lived with me in the Change the capitalization
I
city
because, both my parents worked in the city
. Thus
, we lived
in the town Wrong verb form
live
want
to Correct word choice
and want
expend
lots of Verb problem
spend
money
for the rental, water bill
, nanny Fix the agreement mistake
bills
salary
..Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
etc
rather than earning Correct your spelling
etc.
money
. Although
, finally
we moved near to the grandparents’ house
. As a result
, don’t want to pay big money
for the rent, water bill and nanny salary because we are staying own house
and my grandparents by take care me
. Eventually, my family Change preposition
of me
is
able to save more Wrong verb form
was
money
. Likewise
, above I mention living close to parent’s
Correct pronoun usage
my parent’s
house
able to success financial side.
On the other hand
, most of them like to stay they
were born Rephrase
where they
place
. That
is meaning
they Wrong verb form
means
are
like to stay close to Unnecessary verb
apply
parent’s
Correct pronoun usage
their parent’s
house
. However
, people travel long-distance to the working
Wrong verb form
work
place
therefore
, everybody waste
Correct subject-verb agreement
wastes
time
in
the road Change preposition
on
in
Change preposition
apply
spite
Correct your spelling
despite
of live
in Wrong verb form
living
the
hometown. Change the word
their
For instance
, in sri
lanka Change the capitalization
Sri
usually
office is located in the Add a comma
,usually
city
. Ones
in a blue moon transport is available Correct your spelling
Once
home
town from the Change preposition
from home
city
like this
situation humans are using public transport .thus
they are using public transport wants to come bus
top very early. if Change preposition
by bus
office
Correct article usage
the office
start
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starts
8.00
am they want to leave the Change preposition
at 8.00
house
Around 5.30am.likewise
, more time
expends in the road they don’t have relax
Replace the word
relaxation
time
and family time
.my suggestion is this
is very
big Correct article usage
a very
disadvantages
live in they were born Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantage
place
.
To conclude
, in the
Correct article usage
apply
society
many of them Add a comma
,society
likes
to live in their hometown. Change the verb form
like
Accordingly
, their choice also
contrasts. In my opinion, whatever choices are they have advantages and disadvantages. Although
, the above paragraph I explained what is the reason people like to stay close Change preposition
In
their
Change preposition
to their
were born
Wrong verb form
birth
place
and this
choice advantages
and Add a missing verb
has advantages
disadvantage
.Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
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