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many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? what other things can people do t try and have a satisfying working life?

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Ambition is one important aspect
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 any individual in life. People have their likes and dislikes which eventually takes them to choose their career path. I agree to the point deciding career goals in the early stage of life is very
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important. A man with
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clear goals will have a focused mind which helps him to achieve his dreams. For
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 Virat Kohli
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 inspiration for me. The kind of
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 and dedication he has towards his responsibilities is an astonishing part. All that success he got because of the mindset he has developed within himself. "Mind should control your body".
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how tough a man can become in achieving his dreams. Every person has his interests in several fields. It might be technology, sports, music or even arts but making your passion
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your professional gives you more satisfaction than doing work just for money or
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 there will be obstacles when you want to achieve great things, but the ability to withstand and move forward describes the character of a person.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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