the pie charts provides infromation about the destination and employement of UK first degree holders

the pie charts provides infromation about the destination and employement of UK first degree holders
The two pie charts compare the salaries of graduates in employment and are differentiated by gender in two years. The data is given by percentages. It can be seen that the average of both males and females is around 15,000-19,999
dollars
and 20,000-29,999
dollars
. Meanwhile. The only view of them gets varied payment. It is obvious that around 29 per
cent
of graduates got paid 15,000-19,999
dollars
.
This
percentage was similar for both genders.
However
, females graduating got income higher by 20,000-24,999
dollars
compared to males different 6 per
cent
.
Nevertheless
, there were 10 per
cent
of males made money of around 25,000-29,999
dollars
,
while
4 per
cent
higher was made by females.
Furthermore
, 22 per
cent
of employees of men had jobs with payments of 10,000-14,999
dollars
and less than 3 per
cent
of women got the same amount of payment. And the data describe that around 2 per
cent
of female employees get the highest salary (40,000+
dollars
).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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