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The use of social media, e.g. Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact for many people in everyday life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many believe that Social
media
 like Facebook,
twitter
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 and
instagram
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 has greatly
effected
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affected
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 the way
people
 connect these days by reducing
the
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face-to-face
contact
 in
day to day
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 life. I personally feel that, though it made some
obeservable
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observable
 difference in reducing the face-to-face connection, it
also
 helped majorly in many other different perspectives like connecting
people
 miles
aways
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away
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, helping in making new
friends
 and reconnecting with an old friend.
Firstly
, With Social
media
 like Facebook, Twitter and Instagram,
People
got
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 an opportunity to start new connections and
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 great relationships started on the social
media
 platform.
For instance
, In the
last
 decade, many
people
 who connected online are now great
friends
 and few are even married.
While
 making new
friends
, the other main advantage
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the
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social
media
 is connecting with our family and
friends
 who are living in a different state or
country
. Our loved ones are just a dial away only because of
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Social
media
. I personally
,
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 live in a different
country
 far away from my parents, I am able to talk to my parents
everyday
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 using video calls and audio calls offered
in
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 these platforms.
Secondly
, In the past decades,
People
 used to
loose
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contact
 with
friends
 and distant family because they moved to a different place. But now, with the help of social
media
, we not only keep the
contact
 with close ones but
also
 reconnect with an old friend.
For example
, After I moved to a different
country
, I did not have any
friends
 from my home
country
untill
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until
 I came across
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 of my school classmates on
the
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social
media
 living in
th esame
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the same
 city as I am. That really reunited us all into a common group again which is of great stress relief as we all are far away from family. In conclusion,
Although
 social
media
 had an impact on face-to-face
contact
 in everyday life, It helped
people
 in more ways by connecting lost
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friends
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, making
longdistace
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long-distance
long distance
 relations easier and making new
friends
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • self-expression
  • creativity
  • information
  • perspectives
  • maintain
  • genuine
  • miscommunication
  • misunderstandings
  • mental health
  • well-being
  • addiction
  • excessive screen time
  • privacy concerns
  • online security risks
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