The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling
The bar graph depicts the
amount
spent on six
consumer
goods
in four European countries
Britain
, France ,Italy and
Germany
. Looking from an
overall
perspective,it is readily apparent that
Britain
has spent more
amount
in
consumer
goods
.
However
, the tennis racquets
witnessed
Verb problem
were
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the least good. Looking at the details, we can see that photographic film was the most
amount
spent by four European countries,even
then
the most usage in
goods
spent by
Britain
.
Germany
accounted for 167 and 145 respectively.
Moreover
, perfumes in
Britain
have observed at 160% and Italy depicts 155%,
although
the least
consumer
goods
have shown the Framce which at 148%.
Furthermore
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,Furthermore
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in the bar ,graphs we can observe those personal stereos in France and
Germany
have the same
amount
of
consumer
goods
which is 147%.As we observe the toys
goods
France and Italy were the same numbers as witnessed ,even though the lowest good has shown in
Germany
.
Additionally
, in
Germany
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,Germany
show examples
the toys and CDs were the same
consumer
goods
.
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