New Technology have changes the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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today's world, usage of the modern innovations has altered the method

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Students

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spend their time.

According to

me,

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has more drawbacks than its advantages.

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will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. First of all, upgraded technology has made the offspring more lazy. Online gaming has made the children addicted to it. Whenever they get spare time they prefer to play online games. In fact,

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was not the scenario before the new innovations. To exemplify, Earlier peers were seen playing in the parks

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sports like badminton, cricket and football but nowadays

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all has vanished.

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affecting the health of the students as there are chances of getting weakness in the body and

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in the eyes.

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, apps like TikTok, Instagram and Facebook are attracting many youth. It has become a trend among teenagers to use these social sites for

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, heir want to remain up to date on apps like these. Resultingly, they are always seen using social media whenever they have spare time. In conclusion, I would say there are more cons than pros as New technology is making children more lazy and addicted to their phones.

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affecting their health.