The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric

power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the process of generating electricity from a hydroelectric
power
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station. In general, two different sources of reservoirs supply
water
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to the generator at the
power
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station, resulting in electricity distributed to the national grid. Here is a
further
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explanation.
To begin
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with, from the left side,
water
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from a river comes to a high-level reservoir with a dam
that is
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open during the day and closed at night. From
this
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site, the
water
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flows to generate electricity and comes to the powerhouse, where the generator is turned by it, and
power
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lines are distributed to the national grid.
This
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system process is
also
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implemented at a low-level reservoir that we can look at from the right side of the picture. The difference between both is just the
water
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source. On the other side, reversible turbines in the
power
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station operate the generator during the day only,
while
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at night it pumps
water
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from the low level of a reservoir into the high level.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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