Music
, from
longAdd an article
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time ago,
beingWrong verb form
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one
important aspect
inChange preposition
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this
life. There is
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of
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music
in the world that we recognize
atChange preposition
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this
era. The
melodyFix the agreement mistake
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that
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are useful for
performanceFix the agreement mistake
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like theater, cinema, or orchestra. Nowadays,
music
can’t be separated from our
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since we keep listening to
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music
in our daily
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.
PedestrianFix the agreement mistake
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in the street, workers at their jobs, customers at the coffee shop, all of them are listening to the
music
.
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music
becomeChange the verb form
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important for us because we need it. Workers who are listening to
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music
simply because they need
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music
as a white noise that helps them to concentrate their mind
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doing their duty. An insomniac needs
music
because
music
calms their mind and it makes
them Correct pronoun usage
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easy to sleep. Cinema and
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also
need
music
to make it easier to build up the atmosphere and the emotions of the performance.
Music
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,Remove the comma
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sometimes has an identity as a culture and heritage themselves. The use of
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tools that
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from
one
ethnic group is what
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it
has Unnecessary verb
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distinctive characteristics, and those
whatAdd a missing verb
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we call
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as Change preposition
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traditional
music
. Traditional
music
is often recognized as
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tempo
music
.
On the contrary
, the
music
that has
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pace of the tempo
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as
a modern Remove the article
modern music
a piece of modern music
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music
. Modern
music
aimedWrong verb form
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to focus on self or group actualization and commonly can be enjoyed by
people
around the world.
Collectively,
people
nowadays are listening to
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modern
music
more than traditional
music
. It indicates that modern
music
moreAdd a missing verb
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loved than traditional
music
by young
people
generation.
The globalizationCorrect article usage
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takesVerb problem
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a big part in spreading
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music
from
one
country to another, that what makes modern
music
can be Verb problem
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accepted globally compared to traditional
music
.
This
is a good thing since we don’t have
limitationFix the agreement mistake
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for enjoying modern
music
. But at the same time, it’s the fact that modern
music
made
people
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traditional
music
as the heritage of the culture. When
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traditional
music
is no longer become a
favoriteChange the spelling
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, it is feared that traditional
music
will disappear because no
one
can play or enjoy it.
However
, even
weCorrect word choice
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like international
music
more, there must be a balance move to
studyWrong verb form
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and
listenWrong verb form
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to
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traditional
music
, so we don’t forget its existence and the culture is not extinct.