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In the furure all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In upcoming years all
vehicles
 like cars, buses and trucks will be automatic driving and only the people using these types of
vehicles
 will be passengers.
This
 essay completely believes that it has more pros than cons because an automatic car can avoid accidents and it prioritizes safety for usage.
Moreover
, it has fewer disadvantages like driving in high-traffic areas.
Firstly
, self-driving
vehicles
 may avoid a maximum number of accidents.
This
 has been proven that it obeys all traffic rules and follows the speed limit on travelling roads. As
,
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 it does not require drivers to drive the vehicle there is no human brain involved in order to keep high concentration
while
 driving. There are a lot of benefits for driverless
vehicles
 which might eliminate rash driving, lack of attention and remembrance, passenger usability and so on.
Secondly
, driverless
vehicles
 have a huge advantage in terms of safety measures. It can handle multiple situations as programmed to give importance to passenger's life.
In addition
, manual works like changing gears, regular checking of
vehicles
 and maintenance dates can be notified by countering indication systems. Not only do automatic driving
vehicles
 have advantages but they
also
 contain a few disadvantages in a real work scenario. Usually, many
vehicles
 easily stuck on roads
due to
 heavy traffic.
For example
, the car Tesla is automatic and can be used for travelling on free roads, hill areas and plain surfaces. But there is a main issue when a lot of
vehicles
 are grouped together. The sensor might confuse and stop till the other
vehicles
 get moved. I strongly conclude that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages notifying it could avoid a major number of accidents and provide a safer ride to the passengers. Apart from safety it
also
 promotes comfortability to the people who are travelling in it.
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