Many museums charge for admissions while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Many

museums

charges

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very high

fees

but even there are some

museums

which are free for

public

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the public

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. As every coin have two sides in sam

this

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these

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have

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apply

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also

two sides in same ways

this

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apply

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have

also

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two sides advantage

as well as

disadvantage. I think the advantages of charging

people

for admission to

museums

outweigh the

disadvanatge

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disadvantage

disadvantages

.

Firstly

, As many

museums

charge for admission

this

have

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so many benefits

such

as it

help

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helps

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them to keep the

maintainess

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maintainers

of

museums

.

However

,

museums

is

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are

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charging

fees

then

should

keep

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be

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there

fees

it

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in

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such

ways that everybody can

affort

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afford

it

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them

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. If

museums

will charge

then

the government will get more income which is good for the public.

For instance

, if

museums

will

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apply

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take

fees

from visiter

then

theincome

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the income

of

nation

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the nation

a nation

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will increase which will be good

foor

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for

nation

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the nation

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as well as

people

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the people

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.

Secondly

,

Even

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apply

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there are

same

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some

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disadvantges

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disadvantages

like poor

people

face

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facing

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problem

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problems

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due to

high

fees

.

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, poor

family

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families

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can not

affort

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afford

to go there.

Museums

gives

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give

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alots

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a lot

of information so everybody should get

chance

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a chance

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to visit there so

museuns

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museums

should be free of cost.

Thirdly

, If

museums

will be

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are

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free of cost

then

people

will

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would

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go by which they

will

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would

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get more and more information and data which

will

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would

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help in the growth of

nation

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the nation

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and

also

in the knowledge of

people

.

To conclude

, the above information describes

about

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apply

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the

advantage

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advantages

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as well as

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the disadvantage

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disadvantage

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disadvantages

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fees

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of fees

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charge

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charged

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by

museum

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the museum

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. I think the advantages of charging

people

for admission to

museums

outweigh the

disadvanatge

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disadvantage

disadvantages

.