Many museums charge for admissions while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Many
museums
charges
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very high
fees
but even there are some
museums
which are free for
public
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the public
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. As every coin have two sides in sam
this
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these
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have
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also
two sides in same ways
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have
also
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two sides advantage
as well as
disadvantage. I think the advantages of charging
people
for admission to
museums
outweigh the
disadvanatge
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disadvantage
disadvantages
.
Firstly
, As many
museums
charge for admission
this
have
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so many benefits
such
as it
help
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helps
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them to keep the
maintainess
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maintainers
of
museums
.
However
,
museums
is
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are
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charging
fees
then
should
keep
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be
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there
fees
it
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in
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such
ways that everybody can
affort
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afford
it
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them
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. If
museums
will charge
then
the government will get more income which is good for the public.
For instance
, if
museums
will
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take
fees
from visiter
then
theincome
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the income
of
nation
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the nation
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will increase which will be good
foor
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for
nation
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the nation
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as well as
people
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the people
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.
Secondly
,
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apply
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there are
same
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some
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disadvantges
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disadvantages
like poor
people
face
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facing
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problem
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problems
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due to
high
fees
.
For example
, poor
family
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families
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can not
affort
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afford
to go there.
Museums
gives
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alots
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a lot
of information so everybody should get
chance
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a chance
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to visit there so
museuns
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museums
should be free of cost.
Thirdly
, If
museums
will be
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are
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free of cost
then
people
will
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would
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go by which they
will
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would
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get more and more information and data which
will
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would
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help in the growth of
nation
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the nation
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and
also
in the knowledge of
people
.
To conclude
, the above information describes
about
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the
advantage
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advantages
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as well as
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the disadvantage
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disadvantage
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disadvantages
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fees
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of fees
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charge
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charged
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by
museum
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the museum
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. I think the advantages of charging
people
for admission to
museums
outweigh the
disadvanatge
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disadvantage
disadvantages
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Revenue stream
  • Acquisition
  • Enhance
  • Manageable
  • Overcrowding
  • Socio-economic barrier
  • Cultural awareness
  • Fluctuate
  • Diminish
  • Strain
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