Playing computer games only has negative effects on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

believe that computer

games

solely have bad impacts on

children

. I partially agree with

this

statement and here are my reasons. Streaming

games

are growing popular among young

people

. There are many types of

games

,

such

as fighting, racing, and dressing. Young

people

tend to be the biggest customer of these

games

. Some parents are concerned that their

children

are spending too much of their time on

this

activity. Some

children

do have an addiction to gaming. Apart from that, some

games

require payment to step up to the next level ,so some young folk lose their money on unnecessary things.

For example

, Some

children

play

games

all the time, and

as a

result

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they lose attention more easily to boring subjects or activities. Another example, some

children

have been exposed to the screen too early in their lives, and some of them appear to have a language disorder,

such

as delay in speaking.

However

, many

games

help

children

learn many skills which are not taught in school,

such

as strategic thinking and planning.

For example

, fighting

games

require

children

to develop critical thinking and planning to use their limited resources efficiently. Some

people

can earn money through e-sport competitions or gaming influencers, which

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quite well-known these days. In conclusion, Computer

games

might have some bad effects on

children

,

such

as over addiction, and loss of attention more easily.

In contrast

, they are

also

part of learning tools for

children

to develop many skills and are becoming a future job for the next generations.