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Q- Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In
this
 current era, Pollution has become a huge issue worldwide owing to alive species continuously dying . Few masses perspective that atmosphere issues should be tackled on an overseas
whereas
, another opine that it could be solved only one country. In
this
 essay, I intend to analyse the logic of why the domain conundrum must be solved in either the world or the state in upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand , there are a plethora of reasons is that why consequences need to be amplified intercontinental . To commence with, some threats come all over the world
such
 as tsunamis, and earthquakes,
as a result
, the ocean would be displacement suddenly and cause devastating property damage and loss of life.
consequently
 ,
This
 question could be faced universally in every year
Moreover
, Citizens face not only food problems but
also
 their residing houses.
For example
, In CHINA , the spreading of COVID-19 is worldwide so authorities should be focused on how they can control
this
 headache .
On the other hand
 , there are legitimate reasons why surrounding problems must be solved only by a nation .
Firstly
 if the government focuses only on one province, it could be resolved more quickly rather than the world because in small regions some little hazards can occur
such
 as water pollution, and greenhouse gas impact. Afterwards, Some chief ministers can focus quickly and it can be solved as soon as possible.
For instance
, In INDIA prime minister is focusing on everything like, Solving the electricity dispute, Removing plastic beg from polluted rivers etc. To recapitulate, even though having attention worldwide by the authorities may provide better facilities for the environmental dilemma ,
however
, if I talk about a state issue , It can be prevented speedy,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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