The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the most liked subjects by
students
of two middle schools, A and B
Overall
, the majority of students
in school
A favour the sports subject
, meanwhile drawing seems to be the favourite
class for school
B
.
First of all, we can see that the least liked subject
in school
B
is Science as it only has two out of sixty students
who voted for it. In contrast
, it is the second favourite
subject
in school
A where nine students
loved it. Other than that, the sports subject
is also
not favoured by students
in school
B
but is the most liked in school
A. It has 36 votes in school
A but only 5 from school
B
.
Then
, it is proven that craft or drawing is the favourite
subject
for students
in school
B
where 25 students
like it. However
, the subject
recorded the least vote in school
A with only for votes. The top second subject
in school
B
is language and most students
in school
A did not vote for it. It has a difference of 13 students
where 18 students
put it as their favourite
subject
in school
B
but only 5 students
liked it in school
A.Submitted by aininsofia2004 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, b, school, subject, favourite with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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