The pie chart below shows the native languages spoken by students at Bakersfield senior college in two separate years.

The pie chart below shows the native languages spoken by students at Bakersfield senior college in two separate years.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of people who speak different languages which are ,
English
,
Urdu
, Chinese and others. at Bakersfield Senior College in 1980 compared with 1990 .
overall
, we can clearly see, the difference between the two years , that, the proportion of the
English
language most students speak , and
Urdu
also
many students have been speaking since 1990 .
According to
the pie chart , we can observe the number of pupil's have spoken
English
was a high rate among the other languages , with 70% in 1980
then
55% in 1990 and Chinese and
Urdu
,
Moreover
,
Urdu
has become Figure 28% in 1990 it has increased from 9% to 28%, For
this
results, the clear is the
English
language more growing by the time.
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