The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart depicts information about the favourite subjects of
students
from school
A and school
B
.
Overall
,it is noticeable that school
A had the largest number of students
than school
B
in the period given. Moreover
, sports in school
A were the most popular subject
, while
science
in school
B
had the smallest quantity of students
. Furthermore
, there was a considerable difference in craft and drawing between the two schools.
To begin
with sports, in school
A the quantity of students
was higher compared to school
B
, namely 36 and 5 respectively. Furthermore
, the figure for subject
craft and drawing in school
B
was just 25, whereas
school
B
accounted for only 4. In terms of language, school
B
accounted for 18 which is three half times bigger than School
A ( 5).
With regards to social science
, there was a negligible difference in the number of students
between the two schools, with approximately 10 and 6. However
, subject
science
had 9 numbers of people in school
A which is four times bigger than school
B
. Moreover
, the subject
science
in school
B
had the lowest number of students
over the period in question.Submitted by dimash171206 on
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