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Some people believe that children should be made disciplined by making them obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others, however, believe that those children who are controlled are not well-prepared to tackle the challenges life brings to them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 of
children
 is a very delicate and debatable topic among people. People's opinions differ on whether
children
 should be controlled to follow
rules
 made by their teachers and parents,
while
 others are of the opinion that teenagers should not be forced to be
in discipline
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 as
this
 hampers their ability to tackle challenges in future. Prior to forming any opinion, I will be discussing both the point of view in the upcoming paragraphs. The
ones
 who are of the opinion that mentors and guardians should make the pupils obey the
rules
 and regulations and teach them to be disciplined have their own viewpoints.
Firstly
, Mentees may go on
wrong
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 paths.
This
 can be because they are not mature enough to understand what is good or bad for them.
For example
, we have seen that
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pupils who are orphans or
who's
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 parents are not
giving
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 attention to them will become drug addicted.
Therefore
, elders should always be attentive
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 their
children
 and make some
rules
 so that they
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right
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ways
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.
On the other hand
, the part of society who are of the point that young
ones
 should not be controlled have their own reasons. The main reason is that it will
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their
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 development of the brain and they will not be ready to take any step by themselves and always be dependent on their
elder
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older
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ones
 for their decisions.
For instance
,
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children
 who are
being
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free in their childhood resulted to be more successful in their lives as compared to
ones
 who are always stopped from doing
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things as per their
wish
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wishes
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.
Additionally
, they will never listen to their heart and be happy in their life. They always think
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 whether doing
this
 thing is beneficial or not.
To conclude
,
while
 people have differentiating opinions, I am of the view that
children
 should not be controlled or forced to follow
rules
 because of the bad impact of controlling their minds and wishes on
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 development of the brain which can become a hurdle for them in the way of success.
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