Number of tourists visiting a caribbean island (2010-2017)

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illustrates
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the acaribbean
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acaribbean
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a Caribbean
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of 2010-2017.
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,The tourists visiting a Caribbean
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1 to 3.5 million from 2010 to 2017.The count rose up gradually.Nowadays,people most likely choose to visit
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on vacation with their families. Cruise
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moderatly
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moderately
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up
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from 2010-
2017
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in between a drop
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2012.Over the period,It increases year by year. In total 2 million visitors visited a
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Caribbean
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2017,These
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of cruise ships are
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as adventerous
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as classy.It has Rooms,
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,
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pool and some play areas for kids and adults,
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ship.
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, The visitors
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interested
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to stay in
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from 2010- 2015,But it has a
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the year 2016,IT m
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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