The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided information describes the visitor numbers in the Ashdown
Museum
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before and after maintenance
along with
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the statistics of clients' happiness during the visit to the
museum
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in an equal timeline.
Overall
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, after the development process visitor numbers increased. At the same two periods outcome of the survey of satisfaction was
also
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positive. The
number
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of visitors was elevated after the development of the
museum
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. The
number
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was increased by 18000.
Similarly
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, the
delightness
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delights
of the customer of the
museum
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were
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improved. In the very satisfied category
number
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of satisfied clients are sky developed by 20. After that, in the satisfied category previously happy clients were 30.
However
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, after ,refurbishment the
number
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of satisfied visitors was 40.
On the other hand
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, in the dissatisfied, and very dissatisfied categories numbers declined by 25 and 5 respectively.
Last
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but not least
number
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of
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remained constant.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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