Travelling to different countries helps people to become more open-minded and tolerant. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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people

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believe that going abroad helps shape

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to be more generous and tolerant. I definitely agree with

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statement. Here are my reasons behind

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to other countries is one of the best ways to have an eye-opening experience. There are many unfamiliar cultures, peoples, foods,

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and places

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. Travelers have to adapt themselves in order to

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fit in their new contexts and get

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local residents. These skills help them become more

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to other

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, When

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to China, some might

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to face unacceptable

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as

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in using public toilets,

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and aggressive

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shouting.

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, in order to have a good trip,

travelers

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need to understand the way

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their lives. It might not be rude in their culture and those visiting that place probably have to put up with their culture.

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, Visiting unfamiliar places and cultures

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us

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more cautious. Not only aware of dangers

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but

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aware not to express inappropriate things in that country.

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, women in some countries are required to cover their faces because of

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religious

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beliefs. A

foreigner

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traveler should

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of these regulations and follow them strictly. In conclusion, Traveling abroad helps

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gain more insights

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their lives in different contexts and cultures. These help them

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more empathy

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others and awareness to see things

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different perspectives.