The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
is a bar chart indicating the number
of visitors
to 3 different London museums
from 2007 to 2012. The number
of visitors
is indicated in millions. Each different color
bar represents one Change the spelling
colour
museum
.
There have been many changes in the number
of visitors
of
each of these Change preposition
to
museums
throughout the years
.
The most flagrant changes being
attributed to the National Gallery.
The National Gallery has a significantly increasing trend. In 2007 it was the least visited Wrong verb form
are
museum
of all 3 with only more or less 6 million
visitors
. Then
it gradually augmented, passing to 11 million
3 years
later in 2010 and finally
to 16 million
in 2012. This
is a very significant augmentation as the number
of visitors
more than doubled in 5 years
.
The Victoria and Albert museum
Capitalize word
Museum
on
the other hand, has had a decrease in Add the comma(s)
,on
visitors
.
In 2007 it had 14 million
visitors
, far ahead of the two other museums
but then
throughout the years
, this
number
started to decline. In 2008 it was roughly the same. It was not until 2009 that the number
of visitors
truly declined. From 14 to 8 million
. Then
down again in 2010 from 8 million
to more or less 6.5. Since then
the museum
has slowly been regaining visitors
with 10 million
visitors
in 2012
Lastly
, the British
Museum
. In 2007, the British
museum
was slightly behind the Victoria and Albert Capitalize word
Museum
museum
with 13 Capitalize word
Museum
million
visitors
. Unfortunately, this
number
quickly declines
as in 2008 the Wrong verb form
declined
museum
only counted 6 million
visitors
. In 2009, the same, 6 million
. It was not until 2010 that the British
Museum
started gaining popularity again growing by 1 million
visitors
in 2010 and all the way up to 14 million
in 2012.
Overall
, these 3 museums
had very different evolutions throughout the years
. Maybe through great expositions, the British
Museum
and the National Gallery Managed to gain many visitors
while
the Victoria and Albert museum
Capitalize word
Museum
have
had a slight decline in clientele.Change the verb form
has
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, museums, museum, years, million, british with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "more or less" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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