Some feel that it is impossible for a country to be economically progressive and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
In
this
modern era, it is undoubtedly shown that all countries are struggling to maintain economic background and environmental safety. Some think that it is possible to safeguard Linking Words
equally
in these matters. I believe that countries can make it easy to handle our economy and the surroundings in the same period of time. Replace the word
equality
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the Change preposition
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and
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end
one
hand, in general, a proportion of people believe that the nations can manage to increaseCorrect article usage
the one
financial
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financially
wise
. Simultaneously, they can be friendly with nature. Correct word choice
apply
For example
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Firstly
, today's generation of people are putting more effort into making hygienic areas to live in and they prefer to plant a tree in their house or apartment.Linking Words
Secondly
, all parents are given valuable education for their child's future. It will help to settle our society's financial needs. Linking Words
Thirdly
, the government is taking action to control pollution and invest in international trade. These reasons will surely help to grow our economic status and clean outer space. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the number of folks hoping that the country cannot handle being economical and friendly with nature during the period. Linking Words
For example
, numerous corporate companies and manufacturing industries are Linking Words
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building
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many buildings for their field's growth. Another reason is that people always take care of themselves and their relatives.They do not care about the nation. Change the verb form
building
Therefore
they easily destroy the environment to fulfill their dreams. Linking Words
Moreover
, these reasons are the main thing to those who believe the latter statement. Linking Words
To conclude
, after analyzing both views it has more positive despite negative comments. In my opinion, a country can possibly manage to focus on its economic status Linking Words
while
maintaining the environment.Linking Words
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