Some people think that boys and girls should attend school together. Others feel that they should be educated separately. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
In the modern world, we are discussing single-sex schools more and more frequently. Separated
education
one
of them. Some people claim that boys and girls should attend together, others say that we should concentrate on divided Add a missing verb
is one
education
. In my opinion, there Add a missing verb
are isa
isa
number of Correct your spelling
a
truth
that we should study together not Fix the agreement mistake
truths
being
separated.
Wrong verb form
be
Firstly
, people who say we should attend together, consider that it will not disturb the education
process. It could be explained by the fact that other gender
would get Fix the agreement mistake
genders
same
experience and might increase their comprehension of Add an article
the same
academy
material. Replace the word
academic
For instance
, after
Add a hyphen
after-school
school
courses, are intended to understand missing material.
On the other hand
, other thinks
that dividing boys and girls as a group is the best way of schooling. Why had Change the verb form
think
not
Correct pronoun usage
they not
we
Correct pronoun usage
apply
enforce
it previously they were Wrong verb form
enforced
on
the peak of popularity in Change preposition
at
this
period?
Singe-sex Change the punctuation
.
school
in general may help enhance academic records. Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Moreover
, the main of
geniuses from there like Alfred Nobel or Bonaparte Change preposition
apply
which they
changed Correct pronoun usage
apply
Correct article usage
the world
world
outlook to anything. Change noun form
world's
As a result
, it leads to a global discovery or essential historical events which is occurred
on Earth.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into consideration I would argue that both Wrong verb form
that occur
of
Change preposition
apply
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
education
system
should exist in Fix the agreement mistake
systems
same
proportions without interfering Correct article usage
the same
into
Change preposition
with
own
business. Correct pronoun usage
their own
However
, the view I support is coeducational
system, Add an article
a coeducational
the coeducational
due to
the fact it would significantly improve the social abilities of child
who merely started in primary Fix the agreement mistake
children
school
. Eventually, the child would not have any speaking issues with the opposite sex in comparison with children who study at single-sex school
.Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Submitted by dnm.best on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the introduction and conclusion are clearly present and relevant to the topic. Provide a stronger logical structure to the essay with a clear progression of ideas.
task response
Address the task question more comprehensively by providing more detailed and relevant arguments for both sides. Include specific examples and evidence to support your points.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!