In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many parts of the world, there has been an increase in the number of the elderly. Many are of the opinion that

this

brings a menace to the government

while

others believe they are needed in

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society. There are pros and cons to

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and in

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essay,

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will justify why I think the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages. On the one hand, a major disadvantage is the reduction in manpower. The working populace consists

majorly

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of young adults and middle-aged persons but with an increase in the elderly group, there are

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hands available in the labour market.

This

could

subsequently

lead to a decline in economic growth.

Furthermore

, there is a divergence of funds, which could have been used in other sectors for the

care

of the aged.

Hence

, these divisions are subpar and affect their offspring.

For instance

, the USA has a greater percentage of youths who occupy major positions in the government and have brought new innovations that have brought nationwide growth with equitable distribution of resources.

Furthermore

, an increase in the elderly population causes a rise in the health burden of a country. The geriatric age group are known to have chronic illnesses that require long-term management.

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will require medical supplies and facilities that add to the cost spent on healthcare in order to be able to

care

for their specific health needs. In the UK, there has been an increased need for homes and medical

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personnel

for the

care

of senior citizens

due to

their increasing size.

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is why I am of the opinion that

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development

has more negative impacts.

On the other hand

, a few advantages exist as pensioners offer great help

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the

care

of children. Most youths after having children rarely have time to

care

for their children

due to

their busy schedules but their retired parents can offer to

care

for them

while

they at work.

For example

, in my city, school drop-offs are mainly done by

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of the pupils as many parents are occupied with work.

In addition

, historical values and cultures are passed down to the younger generation through the stories told by the aged.

This

would help to preserve their heritage and help them remember their roots. In conclusion, there are varying views concerning the impact of the surging number of the elderly.

Although

they provide help in the home

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their dependence causes

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burden on the economy.