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It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In today's global problem in my country and in the world it is thought by some
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 better to live in a
city
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while
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 other
people
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 believe that life is better in the
countryside
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.
This
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 choice has a number of benefits and drawbacks which will be discussed in
this
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 essay. I am certain that life is better in the
countryside
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,
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 as at the utmost products make a
countryside
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, namely in the future landscape change
city
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 or company than big starvation beginning. Nowadays our country has a lot of environment like a village but the river does not have enough water
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 another complication. The village's air is better than in a
city
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 it is village convenient more than a
city
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last
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 but not least things. From my point of view, a
city
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 is more comfortable than a greenbelt, for,example a comfort zone for a children's playground, like a little but really beautiful gardens and essentials like a safe home. But the big problem is all the
people
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 who want to occupy their time working, relaxing, and enjoying only weekends
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 the best problem. I mean
people
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 who live in a
city
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this
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people
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 have no extra time for conversation like relaxing, or sleeping. But
people
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 who live in a
city
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 has on
people
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 own account for life. In conclusion, both the
city
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 and the
countryside
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 have their own challenges and amenities, and I don't want to be little either.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • infrastructure
  • cosmopolitan
  • commute
  • sociocultural
  • prosperity
  • sustainability
  • rural
  • tranquility
  • urbanization
  • relocation
  • residential
  • populace
  • ecological footprint
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