It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In today's global problem in my country and in the world it is thought by some
that is
better to live in a city
while
other people
believe that life is better in the countryside
. This
choice has a number of benefits and drawbacks which will be discussed in this
essay.
I am certain that life is better in the countryside
, such
as at the utmost products make a countryside
, namely in the future landscape change city
or company than big starvation beginning. Nowadays our country has a lot of environment like a village but the river does not have enough water that is
another complication. The village's air is better than in a city
it is village convenient more than a city
last
but not least things.
From my point of view, a city
is more comfortable than a greenbelt, for,example a comfort zone for a children's playground, like a little but really beautiful gardens and essentials like a safe home. But the big problem is all the people
who want to occupy their time working, relaxing, and enjoying only weekends that is
the best problem. I mean people
who live in a city
this
people
have no extra time for conversation like relaxing, or sleeping. But people
who live in a city
has on people
own account for life.
In conclusion, both the city
and the countryside
have their own challenges and amenities, and I don't want to be little either.Submitted by mawka974 on
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