People have different views on how to reduce traffic congestion. Some think that governments should build more train and subway lines, while others think that building more and wider roads will reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Traffic
congestion has always been a serious topic for most
of
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the
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countries and the role of governments in
this
area is often debated.
For
this
reason, many believe that developing alternate ways to reach
to
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one's destination can improve
traffic
problems,
whereas
others argue that having more and wider roads will help. Most of the difficulty is often faced by employed
people
, trying to reach their offices and coming back
homes
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on time without any
hussle
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hassle
.
Narrow
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and a few roads cause
traffic
to move slowly, not letting
people
to
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go on time which
further
create
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frustration and anxiety issues in them. Extending the number and size
,
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will help the
people
to move around freely and easily.
Moreover
, chances of criminal activities,
such
as snatching, target killing, etc., rises as
traffic
moves slowly (bumper to bumper) during
the
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rush hours and
people
waiting for their turns in vehicles are likely to become
target
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.
For instance
, in Pakistan, most of the snatching and
target killing
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incidents occurs during
traffic
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jam. Despite the
above mentioned
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persuasive arguments,
people
feel that the number of vehicles
are
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directly
propotional
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proportional
to the number of paths since it is now easier for every
indiviual
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individual
either belong to
eilte
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elite
class or to
middle
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class, to own a vehicle through loans and other resources The
traffic
will again occupy those free spaces will adjust
accordingly
.
However
, incorporating other
medium
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of transportation can
acually
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actually
contribute to less congestion.
For example
, introducing more trains and developed subway lines can tackle the problem of
traffic
jam
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because
alot
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a lot
more
people
will prefer less expensive and safe rides.
This
method is
also
eco-friendly and time-saving. In conclusion, I
pesonally
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personally
agree that dependency on other mediums like
railway
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should be promoted to be opted for moving around
instead
of relying on just one medium to travel.
This
is how the problem of
traffic
is solved.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • public transportation
  • personal vehicles
  • alleviating traffic
  • environmentally friendly
  • pollution levels
  • road infrastructure
  • traffic flow
  • bottlenecks
  • induced demand
  • sustainable solution
  • urban traffic problems
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