The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The provided plans illustrate the area of an airport now and how it will look after reconstruction next year.
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, the number of
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gates
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increased after development and a Bag drop, ATM, and Car hire
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also
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introduced. There are 8
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for
the
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entry
purpose
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in the airport and these 8
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expanted
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expanded
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to 18
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, the walkway
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from the
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and
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train is
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after the redevelopment. Shops
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in between the PASSPORT CONTROL and
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. On the departures
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, there is only a Check-in counter and a cafe after changes a Bag drop is
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constructed
. On the arrivals
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, there is no counter of
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but a cafe, an ATM and
a
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car hire
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introduced on that
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. The arrival and departure
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has only one way of passing it
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converted in two ways.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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