The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The provided plans illustrate the area of an airport now and how it will look after reconstruction next year.

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introduced. There are 8

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entry

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in the airport and these 8

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after the redevelopment. Shops

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in between the PASSPORT CONTROL and

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but a cafe, an ATM and

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car hire

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introduced on that

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converted in two ways.

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