Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some of the methods used to do this may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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the

growth

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in the population numbers, there has been a steep increase in the demand for

food

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.

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advanced

machinery

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and fertilizers are used to fasten the

growth

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of plants and meet

people

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’s demand at low

price

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.

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this

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situation can bring some benefits

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as for

economy

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, these genetically modified

foods

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could damage the health of

people

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. To start with, it is admitted that

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new means of farming has brought numerous benefits. First of all, using different pesticides and fertilizers made the cost of

food

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much more affordable especially for low-income families.

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, it can fasten the

growth

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of plants, increasing the number of crops on the land.

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, the use of new

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has

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brought some conveniences for farmers. Because it is an indisputable fact that utilizing machines can save the time and the

labor

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.

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, farmers can have

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time to spend

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themselves or

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their family members.

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, with modern

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machinery

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the process would go without emitting much

wastes

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waste

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to the environment.

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,

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research carried out on wheat using new fertilizers contributed to 40% productivity and higher strength against weather disturbance which can be a beneficial solution to famine in different parts of the earth.

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, though there are some advantages that the use of

food

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additives and

machinery

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can bring, still the drawbacks of the condition outweigh.

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, using chemical substances and fertilizer to make the flavour of

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better and fasten the

growth

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of

plant

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plants

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can harm the health of

people

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. It is an undeniable fact that the level of toxins in these

foods

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would be

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significantly high and

as a consequence

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, it

cause

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causes

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different ailments

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as allergies, cancer, obesity

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etc.

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Moreover

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many

restaurant

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are

also

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selling GM

food

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for much cheaper

price

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prices

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to attract a lot of

people

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. After consuming these

foods

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people

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start suffering from illnesses and even many doctors predict for parents that there can be a high risk of mental disabilities for their newborn babies. In conclusion, health is

much

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more important thing than

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money. It is better to consume healthy and organic

foods

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for quite expensive

price

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prices

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rather

that

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eating harmful

foods

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for cheaper

one

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.