In many parts of the world, people now often throw things away when they are broken and buy new ones, whereas in the past broken things were repaired and used again. Why do you think this is the case? What problems may it lead to?

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People nowadays throw
things
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if thing are
use
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,
broken
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or broken
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and buy new ones but in
past
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the past
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broken
things
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were repaired and used again and
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also
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apply
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people
use
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things
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for
long
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time. I think the main reason for
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case is
things
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are
aviable
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available
nowadays easily and fast.
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This problems
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may
it
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lead to great trouble.
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,
nation
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the nation
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throw
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things
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if
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away if
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there
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they
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are
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have been
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using
it
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them
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for
long
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time
as well as
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population
also
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buy
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buys
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new ones for
them self
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themself
themselves
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or same time for
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their
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children
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also
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. population should give
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to a poor public or a
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public. There are some NGOs who accept
things
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women should give to them so it can be useful for them.
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, if a glass is broken
then
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women
usally
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usually
throw it instanced of repairing it.
However
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, society should grow more and more trees so it can
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to
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another
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other
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a
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socity
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society
.
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, The main reason for
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case is that a population get
things
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as well as
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goods and services easily and fast so they
preface
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prefer
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to buy
a
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apply
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new
things
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This
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can cause so many problems like wants are unlimited and
resoucre
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resources
resource
are limited.
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, a community buy new
things
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which are made up of trees so
by
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cutting more and more trees
it
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apply
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can even affect to
enverinment
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environment
too
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.
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,
a
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public should
reuses
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reuse
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,
reduse
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reuse
reduce
and recycle goods and
service
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services
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.
Thirdly
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,
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, in school
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at working place
a
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the
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communities should be
teach
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taught
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the important
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important
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of saving
thinks
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things
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.
To conclude
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, I think the main reason for
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case is nowadays it
have
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become
an
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trend of using new
things
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.
This
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can cause
an
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great problem in
people
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people's
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wants.
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